Titled Work: ‘You Can See Me’
Brief story Description (Not official synopsis:)
World renowned chef Prescott Vaughan was at the height of his career. Right before he’s to leave for Paris to work along side his idol, a horrific car accident leaves him completely blind. His female fianceé leaves him in a state of desperation and depression. He pines for love, and so happens to find it in the form of his very sexy neighbor. Sexy male neighbor, Dr. Rickson ‘Ric’ Edwards. Prescott’s not gay – at least he never considered himself gay – until Ric saves him from a date, gone terribly wrong. The two neighbors hit it off immediately, exploring and learning each other. Things are great until Ric begins to have his doubts about meeting Prescott’s needs. Enter, male escort and aspiring chef, Blair McKenzie, who steps in to fill a void in Prescott that Ric was not prepared to handle. In the meantime, Prescott and Ric work on the issues that prohibit them from finding the love they know they have for each other, but neither can resist the sexy, southern, hotness that is Blair McKenzie who stirs them into unbelievable states of arousal when all three of them come together.
M/M/M GAY EROTIC CONTEMPORARY
WORD COUNT – 78,200
PHASE: Contracted by Amira Press
BETA REVIEW 1 – ‘YOU CAN SEE ME’
I love the sex scenes. They are really good. Endearments are freak good. Strawberry, Sunshine, Bear, Love, Slut ….nice. I liked Blair a lot rather than Pres or Ric as the story passed on. Blair and Ric couch sex scene is hot a hell. I read thrice now. Ending is good. But I was hoping something related to the title. I like the changes you made. Pres having prior experience helped a lot. Hope you like my thoughts or suggestions. Good luck with the publishing.
BETA REVIEW 2 – ‘YOU CAN SEE ME’
Great! Enjoyed! I sure as hell did! 🙂 Just let me add, that I think it was the obvious love the 3 guys felt for each other that makes this work for me. Plus, you can thank J. R. Ward’s last Black Dagger Brother book “Lover At Last” for giving me a good taste of gay erotica couched in a really outstanding story, which no doubt was good preparation. Blessings,
BETA REVIEW 3 – ‘YOU CAN SEE ME’
I just want to say I loved the book. I must admit when you first introduced Blair I wondered how were you going to make all three of them work together, but then Blair was so damn cocky leaving the apartment and running in to Ric I knew they would all be hot together. Oh and hot they were. I like dominant Ric but I like dominant Pres a whole lot more 🙂 This book was great because there was a story it wasn’t just about the sex. The story flowed well I loved the characters Blair was a cutie. Your writing style is great. Thanks for the opportunity to read your book. Please let me know if you ever publish I would love to give it a review.
BETA REVIEW 4 – ‘YOU CAN SEE ME’
Much better job of showing and telling what each character is feeling from both points of view. I felt that I got more of an even flow of emotions from both guys at the beginning and all 3 of them at the end. Much more enjoyable of a read when you can see the whys behind what they are feeling and doing. I didn’t see any plot holes in the book, and the pacing was great. I didn’t see or feel any drag time in the book or points where it felt the pacing was going to slow. Everything kept the book moving forwards. I have to say that if I were to buy this book and read it as you have it written here, I would be extremely happy with my purchase.